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- 2018.04.03
Q11. 요즘 어린이들이 과거 어린이들에 비해 독립적이라는 건에 동의하는가?
I disagree that children nowadays are more independent than the past.
There are some reasons why I think so.
First, Children nowadays are immature and out of control so they do not know what is right or what is wrong. Also, thesedays, the economy is very bad and the price is very high. But, children do not have ability to earn money by themselves. So they should receive allowance from their parents.
Second, Children nowadays absolutely need parents emotional help because they are more weak, sensible, and dependent on their parents unlike the past. For this reasons, they should be supervised carefully until they become adults.
For example, I have a son and he is 13 years old.
But he acts like a baby in home.
Therefore I disagree that children nowadays are independent.
I disagree that children nowadays are more independent than the past.
There are some reasons why I think so.
First, Children nowadays are immature and out of control so they do not know what is right or what is wrong. Also, thesedays, the economy is very bad and the price is very high. But, children do not have ability to earn money by themselves. So they should receive allowance from their parents.
Second, Children nowadays absolutely need parents emotional help because they are more weak, sensible, and dependent on their parents unlike the past. For this reasons, they should be supervised carefully until they become adults.
For example, I have a son and he is 13 years old.
But he acts like a baby in home.
Therefore I disagree that children nowadays are independent.
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