부탁드립니당 너무 쉽고 짧은가요?

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*동의 비동의 예문

Q. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should always give their children advice or suggestions.

My answer:
I agree that parents should always give their children advice or suggestions.
I have some reasons.
First, I can improve my ability because of my parents's advice.
Second, I can find job and directions about my life.
For example, When I was child, I heard to advice for my mother about my job.
so, I could find my dream.
um, I think this is pretty much enough.

* 선택 질문
Q, Some people like to have a vacation in the country or someplace quiet.
Other people enjoy treveling to large cities for their holidays. Which type do you prefer and why?

My answer : I enjoy treveling to large cities for my holidays. I have some reasons.
First, I like lively big cities. so I can feel busy life.
second, I can see good night view because of big buliding .
For example, 5years ago, I went to trevel in hongkong. at that time, I saw good night view at the high building.
It was very good experience.
um, I think this is pretty much enough.