My name is jae hyun kim. but I preferred to be called hyun. I turend 28 years old just last month. I live in apartment building in gwang-ju with my lovely parents

[하는 일, 취미]

these days i'm looking for a job as an banker. i'd like to work in this filed because I studied finance and economics in university and I'm pretty good with numbers. when I want to have some fun(=in my free time). I jog around a park or watch movie at home.

I like these activities because they let me kick back and relax moreover they help me stay fit(건강을 유지하게 해준다)

[성격]

As for personality, I tend to be outgoing. I have a large circle of friends and love to make new friends.(친구의 폭이 넓다.)

[미래의 꿈, 취직이 힘든 현실]

someday i'd like to work for a major bank in korea. these days the job market is super competitive and super depressed because of corona virus. so nowadays I continously keep trying to develop my capability.

마지막 미래꿈 문장이 매끄럽지 못한 것 같은 데 문장 구조를 바꾸는 게 나을 까요?