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  • 2020.07.30
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학교 관련 주제입니다. 


I go to 한국 University. My school is located in 평택 district of 경기. The campus is beautiful. I think it is especially lovely in the spring because many cherry blossom bloom. and There are unique facilities. such as the wedding hall and grass field. Wedding halls is modern style. The grass field is large. sometimes, students can take a walk in the grass field.

 

 I go to 한국 University. During a freshman orientation, I met two girl and one boy. their names are 현정, 정원 and . 현정 and 정원 were sitting in front of me and . When lunchtime, that girls talked to me and . At first time, it was awkward, but now we are best friends. During the semester we go home together by subway. and have lunch together in the cafeteria. I like these friends.


I first visited my university during my freshman orientation. I went there with my orientation group. We spend the day touring the classrooms and facilities. We also had lunch at classroom. The campus was is beautiful. when I went to school, many cherry blossom bloom. It was a very interesting day.


The most memorable event for me was the campus festival last fall. because, many ballad singers came to our school. Among them, I liked K.Will song the most. l went there with my friend. After the performance, we play a game with beer. It was a very enjoyable day.

  


사는 곳 관련 주제 입니다.


I live in apartment with my family. I live that home for last 20 years. so My home is comfortable and cozy. There are three bedrooms and one living room in my home. It also has a bathroom and kitchen. My sister and I use Two bedroom, The rest of the bedroom is a soundproof booth and my sister uses this room to play Cello. The living room be used by my parents. It has a balcony with a great view of the mountains.


I usually spend time with my family every morning and weekend. My family busy during week. Every morning, we have breakfast together. On weekend, we prepare dinner together at home. while having our meal, we talk about current events or watch TV. My family enjoy spending time at home. we take a rest at home. Sometimes, I and my sister play a musical instrument together. for example, there are piano and guitar.



동내 및 이웃 관련 주제입니다.


I live in a small town called 사동. There are many amenities in my neighborhood such as school, bank, and as on. The subway is made up to date. Now we can go in five minutes to 수원. Also, there are many pretty parks in our neighborhood. many neighbors take a walk with their dogs. So my neighborhood is nice place to live.


I think my neighbors are friendly and outgoing. they are married and have three young children. The husband works at his job and the wife is a housewife. Sometimes the wife gives me the food of her hometown such as the strawberry. My family meet them most of morning. At that time we greet each other warmly. 

 

My neighborhood is suburb. however, I recently heard an interesting fact. It happened a month ago. That is the subway construction is complete. This subway connects 인천 from 수원. My town is far from the city center. This trait made it hard for me to commute to college. But now I can go to school easier. People from other cities come to my neighborhood now.



영화 관련 주제 입니다.


I like animation films the best. Animation movies are very touching. This type of movies make me feel relaxed after the movie. Before I first watched an animated movie, I ignored this type of movie because, I think animation is only watched by the child. But after watching the Disney movie Up, I changed my mind. It is very meaningful and makes me healing. So the most memorable movie I’ve seen is CoCo. This movie is also made by Disney.


I like many actors, but Paul Walker the best. He's my favorite a male actor because l was impressed by his movie, The fast and the Furious. In this movie, he had the leading role. and He is a key figure on the team. There is a many scene where he races car. This scene excites me. 


I always book tickets online because I could not have bought what I want to buy a ticket at the box office. These actions seem to be the influence of my personal character. I also make sure to go the restroom before the movie. After the movie, l talk about the movie with people who watched it together.  


I like action films the best. Among them, The fast and the furious7. The story is that criminals and peoples who stop them fight using cars. Paul Walker had the leading role in this movie. he is fit the character very well. The fast and the furious7 is last his movie because he died in the midst of filming. So while watching the movie, I felt sad. 

 


한번에 너무 많은 양을 올리네요.. 첨삭해주시면 감사하겠습니다 (__)

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