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자기소개, 사는 곳 첨삭 부탁드립니다.

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  • 2020.08.02
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자기소개 

 My name is yu jin cha, but you can just call me Jin.
I'm 23 years old. These days, I'm looking for a job in the field of electronics.
I'd like to work in this field, because my major is electronics.
As for my personality, I tend to be a bit creative.
I prefer to make and think something.
So, I want to be an electronic engineering developer.
Now that, my university education is finished, I'm looking forward to starting my own career.

사는곳

-집묘사 
 I live in a 5th floor in a 15-story apartment building in seoul. 
The first thing to see when you step into my house is the entrance area. where you can take off your shoes.
And there is a living room in front of you. There is a flat TV and a couch.
Anyway, on the right there is a study room and a master bedroom. On the left is a kitchen.
Next to the kitchen, you can see my bedroom. The space I like the most in my house has got to be my bedroom and there are several reasons for my preference.To start with, my bedroom is just for me and it's the place where I can spend time all by myself without any distractions. what's more, my room has a beautiful scenery over the window. So i often collect my thoughts while looking at the scenery. I know that my house is not that luxurious or fancy but it's a perfect fit for me!

-가장 좋아하는 방
 I live in a 5th floor of a 15-story apartment building in seoul.
I've got a kitchen, a living room and three bedrooms. Of those, the room I like the most is mt bedroom, which located in the next to the kitchen. My bedroom is not a very large, but it's my safe haven. My room is covered with white wallpaper, and there is a comfortable bed. I usually listen to music or read books on this bed. Also, I often collect my thoughts. 
Among all the rooms in my house, my bedroom is definitely my favorite place to hang out. The only complaint I have is that the room needs some new furniture. I may put in a new desk and a chair to study.

-예전집, 지금집 비교
 When I was child, I lived in a spacious detached house in seoul. It was the place where I grew up, and it was very different from where I live now. Back then, I lived in a large detached house in a quiet neighborhood.
Every room had wood floors and large windows that let in lots of sunlight. The interior of the house created a peaceful atmosphere.
In contrast, my current home is not a large. So it has a cozy atmosphere. And there are many amenities within walking distance such as good restaurants,cafes and so on. But they makes noise sometimes. On the plus side, there is a park nearby, So I jog everyday morning. I prefer where I live now.


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