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I am 23 years old and my name is Jung Eun Song. I am majoring in theater studies of drama department as a junior. I am working as a representative of  a branch of my department.

I started my major, theater, from highschool. Even though I have been participated in things related with theater for 6 years, I have long way to go. That was why I decided my mind to go abroad somewhere as an exchange student to improve my abilities. I'd like to meet broader world than here to get a lot of other experiences. After decision, I was absent from school for a semester to learn English presentably and to get the score of Tofle and Toiec. Beside I am totally interested in speaking English. To tell the truth, I have more confidence at grammar skills than speaking skills. But at least, I can communicate with native American. I have a little problems when I talk something with them who are my foreign friends. This sudden announcement to go abroad made me confused. On the other hand, I felt that I didn't waste of my time. I firmly believe that it would reward my efforts. I have buckled down getting a chance to go United state, and if I could go there, my life would be definitely changed. I am very goal-oriented.

In my opinion, I have been took part enthusiastically in school activities for last three years. It is improved by my scholarship that I got for three times among five semesters. Thus I could active eagerly and I would try to learn a lot of thins as possible as I can.

Besides of my sincere school studies, I have a experience took part in a performance as a assistant of a main dramatug in my university. And I have participated in a theater festival as a volunteer which was held in the city, not in my university. Moreover I worked for various restaurants such as Korean foods, Italy foods and for clothing shops as a servant. It was to develop my spirit of independence and to used to social atmosphere. Because of the experiences, I have learned how to get along with people well. What a most important thing is a responsibility. If I couldn't what I should have done, many people would suffer from the problems because of me. So I tend to deal with trobles as fast as I can. Though that is why I make a few mistakes because of my habit, many people like me thanks for my positive, bright personality. They say I could survive even in island there is no people in. Just as a kidding, I am very sociable and have a strong ability to outlive.

I have two reasons to go there.

First of all, studying in U.S.A would be effective because the system of dramatugy in Korea has imitated American style. Even though time already has passed about more 10 years after accepting the concept of Dramatugy, many people misunderstand in terms of Dramatugy or Dramatug. Many part in my field are weak enough to whither. But if I could learn about their new technique, I would enlighten my friends around me and could bring the direction of my department into more practical way by sharing the information that I learned. So that I would dedicate myself to improve theater industry in Korea at a long sighted view. I could learn the methods that are now used in American. To study broadly, I would be more appropriate at this job. Because I have not concerned on specific courses, but learned many things related with theater to  develop my artistical  discrimination. In case of my branch, many teachers have taught us that we have to watch whole thins equally. That is why I have wider view than others's

Secondly, I 'd like to study how to exchange cultures each other. Personally I have a plan to go abroad to India for learning not only their theater but also their culture. Because there are not many thing imported eventhough there are a bunch of people who have a lot of interest about India. That is why many people misunderstand in turms of India culture. I firmly believe that India have great possibility to grow up as big as developed countries. though I 've a few experience to reach their custom directly (I have travelled there last year. So I have some chances to watch and  feel those) , I 'd like to be a bridge between Korean and Indian cultures. I don't want limit my field into theater. I would like to intermediate  cultures comprehensively. In the future, it is bound to exchange a lot between different countries. So that there would have a lot of collisions, confusion and trobles. At the situation, if I were prepared, I could consult them to lead into harmony and bring the synergy effect by making their distance closer than before. This challenge is a sort of plan I have dreamed. Because it would be my first experiment. American culture seems to quite familiar with Korean. On the other hand, many American don't know about Korean culture. And they seem to that they don't have any interest of Korea. Not only spread my culture out, but also make them fusion appropriately. And I should practice to used to accepting various customs by opening mind and feeling without any prejudice. If I could be successful this step, I would have determined confidence at my decision about my future.

To bring dreams into true, I would take the courses of acting, dramatugy and directing. In my opinion, acing and directing are the most vital part of practical things. Besides, my own major of theory related with performances is also  necessary to make epoch making development. I don' t want to alienate one of them. Both practical or theoretical things are definitely important. By taking two type of lectures I would facilitate my interest more comprehensively. I had learned acting when I was a high school student for 3 years. I have raised my dream from high school though I changed my specific concern. And I have studied theater studies for 3 years. So I firmly believe that I would have not many trobles to adjust there.

I would participate in not only sincere school activities but also outer school activities. I should have two roles in school plays as a staff or actress. At least, I could take part in as a staff. Because I have been learning make-up and lighting.

And I have a plan to travel around the cities by performing our own play in art bridge program. That is because I would like have chances to look around other place. I always pursue challenges and adventures. Also I would take part in a cultivating program to keep my fit condition, to get different experiences and to get along with other friends.