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1. 자기소개는 스킵 할게요


2. you indicated that you like to ride your bicycle, when did you learn how to ride?how often do you go cycling? provide as many details as possbile

 

yes. right, I think I’d like to ride a bike. because it’s one of my favorite sports when I have free time. in particular, weekends. anyway. when I was very young. I learned how to ride a bike from my father. back then my father rode a bike well so I evnied him. so I asked him about how to do. my father taught how to ride a bike. and I was getting better as time passed. and in a couple of minutes. I rode a bike as he did. these days I usually I ride a bike at a park. because it could be great way to heal my mind

 

3. i’d like to know more about why you like riding a bicycle. when was the last time you went riding? where did you go? who did you go with?

 

yes I did. I like to ride a bike as you said. I think well. you know many people enjoy riding a bike or something. because it could be good way for people to relieve stress from life. for me I have same reasons like that. and I recently rode a bike with my friends. it’s about a couple of months ago. and it was at the han river. I think the weather on that day was perfect. so I wanted to ride a bike with buddies. so I decided to go to a park and vistied there. at that time, we were enjoying whole time with bike. and finally we ate some delitious dish on a bench. it was unforgettable experience for me.

 

4. tell me about the first time you rode a bicycle, where did you try it? who helped you learn how to cycle? how did you feel when you tried it?

 

well. regarding learing my skill about bike. you know, I think I learned how to ride a bike from my father. actually, it happended when I was very very young. so if I remember correctly, it was in front of my apartment. I was with my father. and he brung bike into the park near my house. so he taught how to do with bike for me. and I was good at doing like him at once. it’s because I had some exercise skills. by the way, it was first time to ride a bike. I felt like I was just really happy and I just enjoyed airs while riding a bike. it was really cool and even made me feel free. so I’d like to recommend riding something like bike when you need to feel better.

 

5. when people discuss traveling to other countires, what are the things that they’re most interested in doing or seeing? why are these things of such interest or importance to travelers?

 

um,,, when it comes to traveling. I think it’s very important for traveler to enjoy a bunch of cultures things from other countries. because it’s the best chance for them to learn certain things such as traditional food, special sports, various people and so on. so I think what traveler have to have is 수용성. for me, I always try to receive all of things from culture differences whenever traveling abroad. as a result, I became a big box which has a numerous number of knowledge about national things like history. so, i’m telling you, many people including the travelers try the best to get many informations as much as possible.

 

6. have you ever traveled overseas? if so, plz describle one of the places that you have visited. if not, pick a foreign country or city that you’d like to visit and describe why you’d like to go there.

 

yes. as you know, i’ve been to many countries including germany, france, czeco, england, poland and asian countires. I always wanted to travled aborod as mch as possible. that’s why I visited many countires. for me, one of my best places is I can say well.. england. the reason why I choose this nation. it’s because of the soccer. since the childhood, i’ve had a big interest in soccer. I think my father liked seeing soccer game held in england that’s why I love to, by the way, when I visited there, I was just happy. I could attend a soccer game in my eyes. that’s fact made me feel interesting. anyway, I really watched real time game and I felt like I could fly in the cry. except for this game, there were many things I could enjoy but I didn’t have time enough to do, I couldn’t, so it’s so bad. if I have more time in there, i’d like to do everything as much as I can do.

 

7. tell me about your dream trip, where would you go and who would you go with? what activities would you like to do there? why do you want to go there?

 

um,,, well. I think i’d like to visit japan. but i’ve already been to there. it’s maybe. my grandmother was from japan. that’s why I’d like to travle there with her. however,, I have only one thing on the minus side. my grandmother is getting lold more than before. so he’s not in good condition. so i’m not sure she can get on the plane more than about 3 or 4 hours. I think for her, this trip also could be tough thing. anyway, if the time allow me and the health of her allow our trip, i’d like to go there, and eat delitious food in osaka which is her hometown. and l hope to see various views in japan for her. she is my precious person in my life so I really hope to.

 

8. what is your favorite hoilday during the year? why is that day your favorite? what do you do on that holiday? give as many details as you can to describe holiday.

 

about my best holiday, I can say new year. the reason why I select this holiday is that I just feel like I get one more age than before. actually many people don’t like this. you know?, probable you will be with them because one more age means getting closer to death. oh,, it was so scary thing. sry,, anyway I like new year. what I like the most about new year is seeing new sun from the sea. many people in korea go to the beach for seeing sunrise on the first day in new year. I also like to see it. so I always go there with my family or sometimes with girl friend. and while seeing it, I wish certain thing with closed eyes. it’s really special thing in korea. eva do you have sth in common with me. I mean is there any special thing in your country!

 

9. what is the first holiday that you can remember? where did it take place? who did you celebrate that holiday with? tell me about it in as much detail as possible

 

umm,, well I think. what I can remember the best in my life. well I can say the christmas. you know. this holiday is very familiar to many people from all of countires I think. in particular, it was in america. by the way, the reason why the christmas is my best one is perfect atmospehre on that day, you know, all of main streets in seoul are covered with red color and with many beautiful light. so people in there feel like very happy and can make good experiences. and like me, with my family, friends or even my girlfrends spend whole time enjoying that atmosphere. I usually eat delicious food like pizza, pasta and so on. with a glass of red wine. from time to time, with wisky haha. I think the cristmas day was unforgettable day because it has many special things for me. I like everything. you know. I love all of things from cristmas.! eva what your favorite?

 

10. i’d like to know about a memorable holiday experience. which holiday was it? when did it happen? wh was there? what made the holiday so memorable for you?

 

well. speaking of my experiences about holiday. it could be ,,, well. you know, i’d like to say to you happy new year with my girlfriend. it was 1 years ago. I was with her. we decided to stay with each other on the final day last year. I think it was just 낭만적인 thought. don’t you agree? by the way, we prepared amazing dish like korean traditional foods and drink like wisky. and at around night, we ate all of this food. and then we spent whole time seeing romantic movies like notebook. eventually at 12:00, we celebrated happy new year. and we gave special gifts to each other. I got warm clothing and I was really satisfied with it. so it was my best one in many holidays I enjoyied. by now, I can’t forget it.

 

11. let me provide you with a situation to act out, you wanna rent out your home for a few months while you are overseas. a potential tenant has come to look at your place. tell them all of the good things about your home. describe it in as much detail as possible

 

hi there. i’m minkyu and the owner of my house you’d like to rent. haha nice to meet you really. I’m happy to rent my house. because my house has a huge amount of good things. yes~~ you are really lucky. so let me tell you good things about my house. yes. I can say,, well the first is my house is perfect place for people like you. because you said you are student. so you wanted the house within walikg distance from subway stations. right? it’s a stone’s away from my house. really It takes only one min haha. and another is there are many convenince stores near my house so you can get everything whenever you want. you know it’s really important thing for people. final good point is I can say very quiet place. when you need a godd rest, you can always take the best rest in my house. so you don’t have to miss this chance. after seeing my house, tell me if you want to rent. byebye.

 

12. there’s a problem i’d like you to solve, your trip overseas was cancelled at the last minute, so you have to cancel the rental agreement. explain the situaion to the tenant and offer twe or three alternatives to the problem

 

oh,, hi i’m minkyu, as you know, I will be supposed to go out for a business. but unfortuantely it’s all canceled because of bad situations.. so I think I will cancel out agreement for house. i’m really sry for informing it. really sorry, anyway, I have 2 alternatives so you don’t worry about it. maybe you will be satisfied. the first is I have another house near what you will get into. this place also is located near the subways stations but it’s littble bit noisy place. how about you?? oh,, you don’t like it. um it’s okay, another place I have. this house is a littlbe bit far from the subway station but it’s really quiet place and it’s within walking distance from the best convenience store so for you, it’s really great choice. oh you like it??? so you first see my house and then tell me if you wanna rent a house. I will send you address and password. I againg sorry for my bad.

 

13. have you experienced a time when you planned sth, but it didn’t work out? describe the situation and explain what the problem was. how did you solve that issue?

 

um,, actually I have many experiences about plans. as you know, many people have troubles haha. for me, a couple of years ago, I planed to travel the beach with my friends. it was of course summer. so we decided hotel, schedule and so on. at the time, I thought everything we planned was perfect. but unfortunately. on the day, all of a sudden it was heavy rainning. I didn't expect it. my friends also didn’t. but we were okay with it. because we were all positive guys. the day we just went there and playing game in the water with heavy rains. haha it was really mad things but for us, it was really happy experiences. after spendings time, we went to the hotel and we took a shower. on the next day, we got all cold lol, but we smiled a lot. at the time we were all young and free. so we could do like it. to solve rainy day problems, we just enjoyed the situation.

 

14. how has TV changed over time? what was it like when you were a kid, and how is it different now? compare the differences and provide as many details as possible

 

well about tv appearance?? I think in the past, the tv looked like big box with screen. when I saw it at first, I felt like it looked like funny box. I think it had a low quality so I couldn’t see high-resolution contents. it was maybe SD. I mean it didn’t show HD. on the other hand, these days. there are a bunch of high-end TV out. you know. we korean make these kind of things like samsung TV and LG TV. so by using them, many people from various countries can enjoy high-resolution progamme at home. it’s amazing development I think. and Tv designs is modern-style and it’s really really thin, I always marvel at this technology,,, eva, do you have korean brand? maybe if you don’t have, you have to buy these electronics from samsung or LG. you will be satisfied. I swear.

 

15. i’d like to know your opinion about tv. what are some problems with current TV programs? what should be done to correct these issues? tell me about it in detail

 

well, it’s about the problem. um,, I think i’ve never thought this issues. it’s because I don’t like to watch Tv, so let me say simple things to you. I heard from the news that there are many issue from programmes. you know. in korea, these days, many programmges are getting free. I mean they are trying to cover trendy contents like what young generations like to see. that’s why several problems happened. many new words makes the older misunderstand. so it could be terrible gap between various generations. I think to solve the problem. we try to use well-used words that all of generations know. but I know it can’t be perfect solution. but I think we have to try this words. there will be a little bit good effect. eva do you agree? or you have another opinion??

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