I disagree with this statement.. the following given statement for a few reasons.

-> following statement은 뒤따라오는 문장을 말하고, 이미 문장은 주어졌으니 given statement이라고 바꿔서 대답해야합니다. 

어느쪽을 말해야할 지 모를 경우, the statement 이라고 하셔도 무방합니다.  

First nowadays, people, more people..balance.. tend to make a balance with their job and rest time.

[또는 many people tend to maintain a good work-life balance.]

Nowadays, many people don't want money, mm, more money by doing work hard.

Nowadays, People put less emphasis on money, and working excessively is not their top priority.

They only just think about rather focus on balancing work and rest time life.

Second, I think the most important aspect of a job is enhancing our expertise in our field.

by this, we can enhance our value in a job.

So For these reasons, I disagree with the following given statement.