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I think one of the most important concerns is safety, when it comes to traveling. People could get hurt, of or get sick when they are on the trips. For instance, People make sure to play it safe near water. They have to warm up before they go into the water. If not, they could get cramps or heart attacks. Next, parents must keep an eye on their kids. If not, kids may have trouble in the water. Meanwhile, food safety is also an important issue. People make sure to eat safe food. If not, they could get food poisoning or food allergies. So once again, safety is one of the most important issues, when it comes to traveling.

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